I really enjoyed the depth you went into describing Stanley's directing style. I also liked the information you gave on why he put all the pictures, and interviews in the movie.
You used a lot of great pictures to set the mood of your presentation. Your work was very well organized and easy to understand the main points from the Freedom Riders Documentary. Good Job.
I think that overall, you did a very nice job describing what the overall message of the freedom rides was, and what its message to Americans at the time was, but there are a couple things that I would like to point out. First, there are some distracting grammatical errors throughout the presentation. I feel that maybe some of the proofing was rushed or non-existent , and that took away from your overall message about the movie. Second, you have a lot of information inside the power point, but most of the information is only on a superficial level. Maybe instead of having a lot of broad information, you could go more in depth in just a couple topics. This is really the only outstanding things I saw, and I think that if you went back and did the two things above, your presentation would be even better than it is now. Overall, nice job.
I really enjoyed the depth you went into describing Stanley's directing style. I also liked the information you gave on why he put all the pictures, and interviews in the movie.
ReplyDeleteYou used a lot of great pictures to set the mood of your presentation. Your work was very well organized and easy to understand the main points from the Freedom Riders Documentary. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteI think that overall, you did a very nice job describing what the overall message of the freedom rides was, and what its message to Americans at the time was, but there are a couple things that I would like to point out.
ReplyDeleteFirst, there are some distracting grammatical errors throughout the presentation. I feel that maybe some of the proofing was rushed or non-existent , and that took away from your overall message about the movie.
Second, you have a lot of information inside the power point, but most of the information is only on a superficial level. Maybe instead of having a lot of broad information, you could go more in depth in just a couple topics.
This is really the only outstanding things I saw, and I think that if you went back and did the two things above, your presentation would be even better than it is now. Overall, nice job.